cahaya reviewed Chapter 3 on Jul 27, 2013 10:40 AM [Report This]

such intense chapter
wow what did happen?
hope nothing bad happen to ayu n ryo ...

Yazz reviewed Chapter 3 on Jun 18, 2011 02:53 PM [Report This]

I hope christine and yamapi got there in time.

KatrinaEvans reviewed Chapter 3 on Nov 14, 2010 03:07 PM [Report This]

Finally it got to the beginning of the story. I really thought Ayumu killed NishiRyo. Did not think she meant that it was her fault that he dies. Or they might not die because their friends came. I'm hoping and praying they don't die.

Dark_Ich_Lu_Na reviewed Chapter 3 on Oct 06, 2010 09:13 PM [Report This]

sad/really sad/gud chapter :)

Tanniyah reviewed Chapter 3 on Sep 14, 2010 04:51 PM [Report This]

ohhhhhhnoooooooo! the sad part has come.after all that! i really thought she killed him. lol
wait not the time to laugh. :'((((( she's soo guilty that she kills herself.

Chiaki reviewed Chapter 3 on Sep 08, 2010 07:16 PM [Report This]

This chapter was longer than the others. Finally it got to the part i was waiting for. Back to the beginning.

SuJu girl 911 reviewed Chapter 3 on May 30, 2010 06:33 PM [Report This]

Author's Response: looool well not yet! i still gotta do yours and bams story XD

Christine reviewed Chapter 3 on May 30, 2010 03:39 PM [Report This]

is this seriously the end?
you are going to end it like this?
you died? and ryo...RYO! HE DIED!
I am such a good friend...kekeke but my God...
this was seriously so sad!
it was all an accident!
I actually got teary eyed when I read Ryo's last moments... :'(
so so sad...PLEASE WRITE MORE!
Author's Response: omg i feel like re-reading the story :D Ryo and Ayu XD

BambiJiBin reviewed Chapter 3 on May 30, 2010 03:00 PM [Report This]

@__@ Omona! I want to know what's going to happen already >__
Author's Response: ^.^
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