Dreamy Luna reviewed The Beginning on Aug 01, 2010 04:15 AM [Report This]

I love your descriptive writing. Keep it up! =D

sweetjellostraw reviewed The Beginning on Jun 22, 2010 12:21 AM [Report This]

I liked how you made Hero sound really botherly to Nicole. He seems like the appa type, yet he's more easy to talk to, and he always leaves the sentence dragging to make his little sister guess. :) Overall, nice chapter. Keep it up! ^^
Author's Response: thanks for the comment!! he is more like an appa..haha!! he's the big brother i've always wanted :D

harmony2244 reviewed The Beginning on Jun 17, 2010 03:55 AM [Report This]

ohhh i see more of you! the breakfast eating! LOL. and i love the bits of humor in this story ;) "inanimate objects!" hehe. i'm not big on the school-setting fanfiction, but i'll continue to read yours! FIGHTING! (...that and you'll probably make me read it.. :3) hahaaaaa~
Author's Response: haha!! i wont make you read it:D you dont have to...
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