Fantasy and demons and fantasy again! I love this genre so much, you don't even understand (and especially when it's well-written, too!) Seriously, dude, this first-chapter is pretty impressive.
Though I do feel bad for Cisarath, you know? Not being able to back to earth (where she'd be burned at the stake), but not being good enough to stay there. It's this awful limbo where you're stuck in the worst-of-both-worlds. (Yeah, just laugh at my awful pun.)
AND THAT DESCRIPTION OF ANGEL WINGS. You have just won over my heart, man. No seriously, your descriptive skills are really great! And I hope he doesn't lose his wings. I dunno exactly what will happen, but losing a part of you is definitely an awful experience that might kill him! :O I didn't think of that last bit until just now, and made this face O_o.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I LOVE fantasy too!!
hahaha, nice pun :P but yes, they are not in the best situation...
I love wings, so I put more attention to that throughout the story xD. Yes losing a part of yourself is awful, but somethings may be worth it ;)
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