Kristy reviewed 1. Heaven & Hell on Dec 24, 2013 10:34 PM [Report This]

Fantasy and demons and fantasy again! I love this genre so much, you don't even understand (and especially when it's well-written, too!) Seriously, dude, this first-chapter is pretty impressive.

Though I do feel bad for Cisarath, you know? Not being able to back to earth (where she'd be burned at the stake), but not being good enough to stay there. It's this awful limbo where you're stuck in the worst-of-both-worlds. (Yeah, just laugh at my awful pun.)

AND THAT DESCRIPTION OF ANGEL WINGS. You have just won over my heart, man. No seriously, your descriptive skills are really great! And I hope he doesn't lose his wings. I dunno exactly what will happen, but losing a part of you is definitely an awful experience that might kill him! :O I didn't think of that last bit until just now, and made this face O_o.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I LOVE fantasy too!!
hahaha, nice pun :P but yes, they are not in the best situation...
I love wings, so I put more attention to that throughout the story xD. Yes losing a part of yourself is awful, but somethings may be worth it ;)
Thank you for your comments!

Dreamy Luna reviewed 1. Heaven & Hell on Dec 23, 2013 04:26 AM [Report This]

Wow, that was a very interesting beginning! I'm hooked! So, a half-demon and a half-angel who don't follow their duty, hmm? They should switch places: the half-demon goes to heaven and the half-angel goes to hell lol I can't wait to read the next chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you! Mmhh, them switching, I didn't think of that possibility... lol
Thank you for the comment xD

cahaya reviewed 1. Heaven & Hell on Dec 06, 2013 05:34 PM [Report This]

morning ...
quite interesting characters and storyline....
Author's Response: Thank you!!

yukino78 reviewed 1. Heaven & Hell on Dec 05, 2013 02:14 AM [Report This]

oh nice. very interesting.
Author's Response: Thank youu!

Blossy reviewed 1. Heaven & Hell on Dec 03, 2013 07:46 PM [Report This]

This is interesting. The girl is a half demon and half human while the guy is a half angel and half human!
It's sad that they had suffered a lot while they were in the human world. I don't know about Massu but Cisarath was burnt alive which is really cruel!
Oooh I wonder what the head demon and angel have planned for the two...
Author's Response: Yes! they were meant to find each other! hahaha
Massu's story is just as bad, he was stoned to death... didn't I say that in the story *facepalm* Sorrryyyy
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