Lee Minah accidentally meets the famous Park Yoochun, who is coincidentally living in the same apartment house. Yoochun broke up with his girlfriend due to circumstances that could not be resolved. Weeks...
Wow, that was very interesting and fun to read! I was hooked and I loved it! I especially LOVED LOVED LOVED the reference to Harry Potter!!! *is a huge fan of HP* Calvin Chen would make a good Gryffindor! He was so brave. =D
I laughed when I read these parts:
"A Basilisk? Like the one from Harry Potter?" Jiro gasped. ---> Harry Potter ftw!
"So you are the one they sent to me huh? A Taiwanese popstar." ---> LOL!
Thank you for writing and sharing this story! =) Your story has a bit of everything I love: a Christmas tale, Harry Potter and of course Calvin Chen and Jiro Wang!!!
If you don't mind, I'd like to point out a few errors I noticed. I'm going to correct them for you since you can't edit your story until the reveal day (Dec 26th). =)
1. A sign suddenly caught his eye attached clumsily to a lamppost. = A sign attached clumsily to a lamppost suddenly caught his eye .
2. "I see a lot if unhappy people a week before Christmas." = "I see a lot of unhappy people a week before Christmas."
3. The mythical serpent suddenly opened it's enormous mouth = The mythical serpent suddenly opened its enormous mouth
4. The two friends escorted them out of the tower and carefully mounted the beautiful Pegasus. = The two friends escorted her out of the tower and carefully mounted the beautiful Pegasus.
Thank god Jiro is safe! Even though he's been kidnapped too (This wizard.. *aish!*), at least he hasn't been harmed yet. Keep him safe, you know? At least for now....
And thus starts the entrance of the pegasus! Reminds me of Fawkes in Harry Potter; they both have magical healing powers! :3 (Except, between you and me- a pegasus is a lot cooler.)
At first, I was thinking that Calvin could totally take on the wizard, but now that we've seen the minions, I'm not so sure! He's strong enough... right? *fingers crossed* Let's let our dandy protagonist come out of it alive!
Oh, it's like Harry Potter! I'm loving all of these book references- first A Christmas Carol, and now Harry Potter! It's a crazy trip for book nerds like me XD
Anyways, I'm quite fond of how the two leads have such a close connection. Even though Jiro was slowing Calvin down in the beginning and begged for him to be left behind, Calvin refused! *one proud mama right here* They're so adorable :3
I hope Jiro will be found soon! Safely, too. He can't get hurt this soon! :O
Woah! Spirit of Christmas, kidnapped? That's not good at all. I'm liking how this story is laid out so far- leaves room for some get-down-to-business plot that I'm looking forwards to! Calvin seems like the adorable type, too. I wonder how he's going to hold up when he's defeating the wizard that kidnapped the Christmas spirit!
And seriously- child kidnapping? That wizard is seriously a sicko. *kicks wizard* Give me back my Christmas joy! XD