You got the first story (well poem) up!
I don't usually read much poetry but I read this a couple of times actually. This was really pretty and sad... at least that's what I thought.
This was so good (even if I don't know much about poetry)
Author's Response: Hime! Let me have a moment please... *gets a bit emotional*
Okey, done! Yeah, finally up! I am officially a writer on AFF *happy dance*
Thank you, you have no idea how much this means to me. This is proably the best comment I have gotten for anything I have written.