ahhh finally I review!
This was beautiful
I loved the start
I love how you portray college life girl, it always fascinates me how you write it...well I'm fascinated by how you write in general but yeah...freaking good job.
Lol Toma seems like such an ass doesn't he?
I'm sure he was surprised when he didn't recognize Lillith
I love how you gave her a psychotic trait hehehe I think everyone has one...it's just more prominent in some ;)
Dude I could just imagine him looking at her butt while she talked...he's such a perv...but I like it XD
Also I have to take a few seconds to mention how incredibly adorable I think drunk Yamapi is...lol...ok back
Man it must hurt so bad to see that the person who is ahead doesn't deserve his talent. You work hard to get where you are and then you see some asshole who has just everything you work so hard for with little or no effort. I would be mad at him too if I were in Lillith's shoes.
I can perfectly understand where she is coming from.
Wow the sexual tension was really thick too...but not in the hot thick...in the awkward almost sickeningly thick...like I was half hoping he would kiss her and half hoping he wouldn't!
You gave me such a dilemma girl XD
Update soon. I want to know how their relationship progresses from this to the prologue...
I love you *hearts*
Author's Response: Wellll <3 thank god I portray it well I'm still in college so that might be a part of it, the vividness of the experiences and the recency effect sure helps a lot. Thank you though :D!
He is an ass!! Yayy I like asshole-y Toma though XD gives him room to grow. Everyone does definitely have a psychotic trait! I believe that too!
That butt thing T.T that one is another vivid experience. Yamapi as a character overall is quite adorable in this story :) I wanted to give him a baby mature character like Akira but SPOILER 10x smarter and more manipulative.
I'm happy it was easy for you to relate to Lillith's dilemma!! When we hear about it from Lillith's perspective just the way she says it she views herself as second best but we get a different glance at that this chapter? Like a glance into how decisions for anything is made? And how the decision to make her second could have come about. Well Toma thinks about it.
Damnnn girlll yeahhh you know meee <33
Love you toooo <333 *hugs* hope we get to talk soon properly T.T