Anna Clair reviewed EAT IT on Sep 03, 2012 04:59 PM [Report This]

Hey Emmaaaa :D

thank you for writing this for me bb :)
the first scene is exactly what I imagined when I wrote down that request! So it fit so perfectly I was like loll-ing the whole way.
The scene with the bacon was also very funnyyy! I love that shopping lady man I felt like that too I was like they're acting like such a couple! Toma talking with a full mouth and Lillith swallowing despite the fact she hates bacon :) it was adorable

OMG :O how could she just walk out like that but I guess she doesn't really think much of him as a man so its okay but still omg o.o that would be sosososo scary for me I'd be like oh god he can probably see that scar i hide and the backs of my knees...did i shave them properly XD

Awww when it said that he felt something when they were cuddling i was like O.O that means he didn't really really feel anything but just kinda loved her and thought they'd look together but nowwww he's actually starting to feel the love that he'd thought would just grow nicely between the two of them.

When she walked in on him naked I was like YES THIS IS ONLY FAIR! HE SAW HERS SHE SEES HIS! ALL IS RIGHT IN THE WORLD. and then the kiss with the picnic scene was adorable! :) it made me giddy just reading it!

And that last scene! Lol them and their nakedness helping them overcome emotional barriers they put between themselves. :) It's actually quite poetic when you think of it that way.

Thank you for writing this Emma :D i loved it!
Author's Response: YAYYYY IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT LILLITH <3 ACTUALLY THE NAKED SCENES I THOUGHT WOULD FIT IN SO I WAS LIKE YEAH THIS IS DEFF HOW I PICTURE TOMALILL <3 GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!! <3
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