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cahaya reviewed ~Okaeri on Jan 24, 2012 06:55 AM [Report This]

evening sis...
just found out about your one shot
quite interesting n nicely written
past love kindda hard to forget...
glad she willing to let go unlike him
ending kindda sad and so glad she's gonna back to her family esp her nice husband n 3 kids ...
Author's Response: Thank you so much lovely for the review. <3 I have plenty of new stories up in case you're interested! Hehe. You have always been such a wonderful reader and reviewer and you always put such a huge smile on my face. Thank you thank you thank you. *hugs* <3 <3 <3

Anna Clair reviewed ~Okaeri on Oct 22, 2011 12:53 AM [Report This]

So I'm going to assume that when you said story that had no reviews you meant this one.

I'm actually sitting down to write right now but I was like no I promised Tali I'd read so I'm going to read :D

This is bittersweet. I hope she doesn't hurt her husband, who seems like a good man, and her kids...because that would suck but then at the same time she really loves this man.

I've always been caught between the idea of ever dying love and familial devotion and probably because of personal experiences i hope she chooses familial devotion.

The reason I think she actually did end up choosing her family though was because of this line -

She took a long look at him one more time, and spun on her heel, quickly walking away.

Tears stung her eyes as she felt him slipping away from her again, turning into nothing but a memory once more.


She turned away and he became a memory. Not he turned away and he became a memory. So it was her choice to make him a memory right?

But the passion between those two was electric :)

and I loved it.

Thank you Tali :)
Author's Response: SHE DID CHOOSE HER FAMILY YOU INSIGHTFUL PERSON. Seriously, you always manage to find every little hidden detail of every single one of my stories. I am so glad you liked it!!!!!!!! UGH. YOU RULE. AND I LOVE YOU.
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