“Are you thinking that this is a dream, Zuki-baka?” = lol he read her mind
“Come on, let’s ditch them and go to the cafeteria on our own,” Keito suggested and without waiting for her response, he was already dragging her out of the classroom. “They’re either hot or cold with each other,” Miki muttered under her breath. = lol got the meaning of the title now. Thought it was because they were in a cold place
Yay Ryo is here!
“Don’t be such a girl!” “I am a girl!” = love their relationship
Ayumu is here too!
“Sensei, I’m in love aren’t I. Love makes people do stupid things,” she heard Keito say. = that sounded like an obvious misunderstanding.
“She already has a guy she loves to bits,” he informed her. “I think what you heard could be wrong.” “Yes, the guy she loves is sexy, gorgeous and rich. She’s really in love with him. Everyone in the resort knows about him.” = lol he's talking about himself.
“Yes, why shouldn’t he? I’m beautiful and smart. A great combination, don’t you think?” = I don't need to guess who her husband is lol
“This time they’re betting on kissing,” Ryosuke commented with a roll of his eyes. They didn’t comprehend what they heard. “Yes, same ol’, same ol’,” Miki repeated. Suddenly her eyes widened. “Wait, when was kissing the same as before?” she shrieked. They all looked at each other all with the identical stunned look. “Maybe something happened when we left,” Yuto mumbled, still in shock. = lol that cracked me up. A LOT of things happened! Too bad their friends not about to share with them
I havw to say this is really long for a one-shot. loves the whole concept. Without Ayumu and Ryo-tan Mizuki and Keito would never have known their feelings. I especially like it when Ayumu and Ryo describe each other without Keito or Mizuki knowing they are talking about the other.
I finally joined here! wow Blossy you amaze me! That was like one hellova like awesome like Hey Say Jump story! I've become your fan all over again. Waiting For You and Runaway Daughter I might read again :)
evening B, great n well written one shot funny when both zuki n kei love to bicker with each other kindda cute when kei's jealous of ryo n zuki's jealous of ayu best friends then lovers so sweet when long time friends fall for one another...love the ending seems like u add ryo n ayu too in here ...kindda cute as both kei n zuki unable to notice that both of them are married ... :lol: take care n enjoy your holidays >33 happy new year ;)
Lol you put yourself in this story? Nice. It was good how you didn't let on that Ryo and Ayumu where married. Mizuki and Keito are cute friends who needed Ryo and Ayumu to show that they were in love and help then in their own way.