Aww, I feel sad for Miuraaaaaa. He's an excellent boyfriend. ;_;
UGH FUCK FINALLY THEY ARE A THING LIKE A REAL THING I AM SOOOO EXCITED.
I think there is a distinct difference between loving someone and being in love with someone. I'm so glad you draw those lines in this story, it's absolutely wonderful.
Beautiful job, I can't wait for this story to be updated! Thank you so much Lil.
I love you!!
I am actually in love with Koyama for real so the way you wrote this was perfection. And like, okay, so I read, "She fell in love" and my phone lit up because Nick texted me and I'M IN LOVE WITH HIM AND IT HURTS ME AND PAIN BECAUSE HONESTLY IF I HAD THE OPTION OF KEII OR NICK I WOULD PICK KEII AM I A TERRIBLE PERSON??
I've definitely read this before but I'm experiencing it again like it's all new... akjfhlaihfe I love it. Ugh.
Also another truth of my life; I've never loved someone more than I love to write (EXCEPT KOYAMA). Ugh. I'm pathetic. He will probably never love me. BACK TO THE STORY I SUPPOSE!! It's so pretty, Lil. Omg.
his mom's BIRTHDAY PRESENT. Guys who love their moms are guys Tali loves. I'M CRYING with happiness.
YAY happy Lillith!
BOOO SAD TOMA. I'm so sad his dad died... Toma's not that bad... truly. ;_;
Jannie is a sweetie and Jun is sooo lucky to have her... AW
I love the relationship dynamic between Jun, Pi, and Toma. UGH PERFECTION.
UGH OKAY I SERIOUSLY LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THAT TOMA BROKE AND CONFESSED HE LIKES HER OMFG
IS THE LAST LINE FORESHADOWING? BECAUSE I WILL CRY. I LOVE TOMA AND HIS FRIENDS UGH
I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE YOU LIL. OMG
Author's Response: T.T they have to go through some trauma right? But the father's death was necessary for obvious reasons. In a way it's where his life starts up again which is why I didn't bother showing much of what happened before that moment. Jannie and Jun are the ideal couple, at least on the front. We'll delve further into their relationship a little later. I KNOWWW that scene was pretty weird because in a way he was just using his emotions for her to distract himself and at the same time twist them into something more manageable as a result of his circumstances. Thank you bb :D! I LOVE YOU TOOOOO
I love the way glasses look on my face but I don't need them sadly!!! lol
DANGEROUS FEMALE LILLITH STEVENS DUH DUH DUH
Omg but she is human and you portrayed that beautifully... I didn't realize how much I was looking at her through Toma's eyes until that, "but she is human after all" comment...
Wow, lil, AMAZING Chapter. I'm excited to continue reading!!! I love you!!!
Author's Response: Loll sameee so we gotta just wait till our eyesight is crap to wear them! Or way them without frames neh XD! LOLOLOLOL the way you say it is so cheesy 70s movie. To be honest not much of the first portion of the story is really in Lilli's POV right? But yeah you're seeing her completely biased but it's hard to remember that! Thank you lovely! :D reading all your reviews is making me giggle like mad reliving the story through you