YAY happy Lillith!
BOOO SAD TOMA. I'm so sad his dad died... Toma's not that bad... truly. ;_;
Jannie is a sweetie and Jun is sooo lucky to have her... AW
I love the relationship dynamic between Jun, Pi, and Toma. UGH PERFECTION.
UGH OKAY I SERIOUSLY LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THAT TOMA BROKE AND CONFESSED HE LIKES HER OMFG
IS THE LAST LINE FORESHADOWING? BECAUSE I WILL CRY. I LOVE TOMA AND HIS FRIENDS UGH
I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE YOU LIL. OMG
I love the way glasses look on my face but I don't need them sadly!!! lol
DANGEROUS FEMALE LILLITH STEVENS DUH DUH DUH
Omg but she is human and you portrayed that beautifully... I didn't realize how much I was looking at her through Toma's eyes until that, "but she is human after all" comment...
Wow, lil, AMAZING Chapter. I'm excited to continue reading!!! I love you!!!
Wow okay I'm actually crying because this whole opening scene where he's trying to figure out why he doesn't want to be with her? Well I feel like you pinpointed Nick's feelings like perfectly. He's still hung up on this girl and he always tells me he wants to be with me but at the same time not... and then he tells me he wants to kiss me, but not yet... But then we kissed and he's like, "You like me more than I like you!" AND IT'S PAINFUL BECAUSE I REALLY LIKE HIM MAN.
...Back to the story. (gomenneeeeee)
Seriously, I love Koyama. He's always my man. My baby!!!!!!! He cheers me up when I'm down, just like this story is right now. (omg it's perfect btw)
Drunk Lillith is HILARIOUS.
OKAY OKAY I GET IT LARGE EYES
OMG I AM DYING
omg yes I do need that much maple syrup you know me soooo well Lil. OMG And Shige totally would cockblock but you know that's okay because I am down for threesomes.
OMG I AM SO EXCITED TO READ MORE AND THIS IS AWESOME AND ARGH I WISH I DIDN'T HAVE TO DO CHORES AND THEN GO TO WORK. I LOVE YOU BB. AHHHHHHH
"Turned back to his crib" I laughed so hard omg it's like... what crib?! And then I realized you meant his place... I haven't heard someone say that since MTV cribs ended lol.
Shige is a babe.
SHE SO GAY OMG AND ALSO I LOVE KOYAMA AS A CHEF MY BB EVEN THOUGH HE'S NOT MY BB IN THE STORY. YET. xDDD I don't know, actually, maybe he never will be~
omg Shige was a virgin up until last year I am dying I love Shige.
HATE HATE HATE I LOVE IT OMFG
THE SEXUAL TENSION IS DRIVING ME UP A WALL
OMFG I'M SO GLAD HE'S NOT HAPPY WITH ME/TALIA/WHATEVER YOU WANT TO CALL ME!!!!!!!!!! lol omg I'm soooo fucking pleased with this story it is literally PERFECTION.
YAY TALIA WAS INTRODUCED I'M VAINLY EXCITED~!
Jannie would claw his face, omg.
Aww we all share a room~!
Dude omg is Toma single you know I kinda crush on him you little brat. xD
I seriously hope Keii comes in soon though and that Lillith and Toma have hot rage sex. Oh yes~!
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER AND I LOVE YOU! I'll read more after class. THIS IS THE BEST!!!
Girl, Lillith is a solid eleven so let's not start this okay??? I will win this fight.
Ugh honestly money ruins everything. Okay, so my Songs About Jane story for Jannie honestly has some shit to do with money. I honestly have hated men just for their money where I've had to work my ass off. It's prejudiced of me, but hey... I'm human.
OOOH LILLITH GIRL I HOPE YOU BURN HIS HEART OUT WITH YOUR FEISTY WORDS.
AWWW NOW YOUR END NOTE MADE ME EMOTIONAL.
Why did she throw up the first time maybe I missed it hmmmmmmmm????????
Okay so honestly I love this story and I'm finally able to actually, properly read it. I'm sorry I've been such a bum up to this point!!
I am so pumped for the next chapter. Oh. Yeah.
For now I have to write though because creativity strikes at the weirdest times. ;D
UWA! I loved this, Cherry! So intense. I've definitely been in a similar situation before, so I know how it feels when someone falls out of love with you. You feel worthless. Beautifully done, lady.
Author's Response: YAAYYYYY!!! You read my story! Thank you so much, Tali! I'm glad you liked it :DD
SO PERFECT CRYING OMG I LOVE THIS STORY. I loved it just as much this time as the first time!!!!! WAH!!!
Author's Response: awwwww why omg why crying? Don't cry! I don't want you to cry! There's nothing sad here! But I'm glad you loved it Tali :D you lifted my spirits today :D!! thank you so much! *hugs*
SO PERFECT. Going to read more. YAY! hehehe. This is exactly what I need to relax with before I go to work. ~
Author's Response: I hope it actually helped with your work! <3 and that your work day went well love :D!!