Aww, I feel sad for Miuraaaaaa. He's an excellent boyfriend. ;_;
UGH FUCK FINALLY THEY ARE A THING LIKE A REAL THING I AM SOOOO EXCITED.
I think there is a distinct difference between loving someone and being in love with someone. I'm so glad you draw those lines in this story, it's absolutely wonderful.
Beautiful job, I can't wait for this story to be updated! Thank you so much Lil.
I love you!!
I am actually in love with Koyama for real so the way you wrote this was perfection. And like, okay, so I read, "She fell in love" and my phone lit up because Nick texted me and I'M IN LOVE WITH HIM AND IT HURTS ME AND PAIN BECAUSE HONESTLY IF I HAD THE OPTION OF KEII OR NICK I WOULD PICK KEII AM I A TERRIBLE PERSON??
I've definitely read this before but I'm experiencing it again like it's all new... akjfhlaihfe I love it. Ugh.
Also another truth of my life; I've never loved someone more than I love to write (EXCEPT KOYAMA). Ugh. I'm pathetic. He will probably never love me. BACK TO THE STORY I SUPPOSE!! It's so pretty, Lil. Omg.
his mom's BIRTHDAY PRESENT. Guys who love their moms are guys Tali loves. I'M CRYING with happiness.
YAY happy Lillith!
BOOO SAD TOMA. I'm so sad his dad died... Toma's not that bad... truly. ;_;
Jannie is a sweetie and Jun is sooo lucky to have her... AW
I love the relationship dynamic between Jun, Pi, and Toma. UGH PERFECTION.
UGH OKAY I SERIOUSLY LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THAT TOMA BROKE AND CONFESSED HE LIKES HER OMFG
IS THE LAST LINE FORESHADOWING? BECAUSE I WILL CRY. I LOVE TOMA AND HIS FRIENDS UGH
I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE YOU LIL. OMG
I love the way glasses look on my face but I don't need them sadly!!! lol
DANGEROUS FEMALE LILLITH STEVENS DUH DUH DUH
Omg but she is human and you portrayed that beautifully... I didn't realize how much I was looking at her through Toma's eyes until that, "but she is human after all" comment...
Wow, lil, AMAZING Chapter. I'm excited to continue reading!!! I love you!!!