you got to hook up Shan to someone hot so Toma could move on hating her and vice versa. some one like Alex Pettyfer maybe??? I AM NUMBER 4 is AWESOME!!! you should watch it. Alex is sizzling... story is premature but the eye candy. yes... it's the eye candy.
Back to real-time review:
I SO FREAKING miss this story! was looking forward to it and "Your love is my drug" has been hovering my inbox along with Impure intention and erika. WHY THE HELL am i behind YOUR stories? I'm just a simple loser like that. bleh.
Toma, our favorite boy is finally doing his moves but WTF? Why is he dillydallying when the wedding issues are so near and "High Five?" That made me LOL. I wonder though if lillith is feeling that love as much as Christine is??? and Tali... the girl needs to get it on with KOYAMA. i mean big time. They'll work things out for sure. who wouldn't love tali? and it was just a slip right? as for a second man whore... can you please please please let him be in a chapter!!!! i want to know his personality and why is he messing up with Toma's girls so much.
am i sensing some insecurity/rivalry going on here? hmmmm... or maybe that's just my alter-ego talking.
I miss you big time Lillith, don't kill me for being late on everything. On biniBningPunkista's own sweet time, she'll be able to be updated with your stories again. *CHEERS*
Author's Response: I will always listen to you Shan dear :) enjoy your hookup (temporary because I need you in the story for something else XD but you get your Alex cameo) I still haven't seen I am number 4! But I saw Beastly! (He wasn't that great in that one T.T)
It's okay you should read only when you have time man T.T i realize now how hard it is to actually make time to do things. Life is really annoying and yet sometimes I'm sitting there I'm like hahahaa life what life T.T?
Toma will dilly dally because he's like that XD he is just that type of dilly dallyer that bad boy XD. I'm glad you enjoyed the High Five! In that scene she was just really awkward and didn't know what else to say XD.
The second manwhore! Ahhh I might cut his part out T.T he doesn't fit anymore! But second manwhore was going to be Ryo :D just so you know because he messed with both Shan and Tali and he was going to mess up Chri and Lilli too but now I don't think I want him to anymore T.T I have another plot line in mind that might be better suited. So you know :D! but it's not happening anymore :( but you will get to know more about his personality soon.
I miss you tooo :) We haven't spoken in a while. When you get time to come on, tell me and I'll try and come on and catch you as well.
Mwah! Thank you for reviewing!