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Christine reviewed Oh You Brain Tease! on Oct 31, 2013 12:14 AM [Report This]

No fucking way...

I can't believe I didn't leave a review on one of my absolute favourite chapters of this amazingly written, plotted and created story

I suck

but here I am!!! and because I am a creep and once again opened this story even though I already read (and reviewed) the latest chapter I noticed that this one had no star ratings...and Christine ALWAYS gives 10 stars so I must have not reviewed...checked reviews and by God...I didn't! So here I am my wonderfully talented friend who loves me very much and I can never love you enough...I will write you a long ass-ed review!!!

First of all I am super duper happy that you like the poster kekekeke and yes Jun does look awkward ne? I kinda miss him…hehehe

Pi is hot as always :P

Sure sure studying is such an important thing to do that taking off clothes is secondary hahaha but joking aside I get Christine’s point too…if only he lost clothes then it meant that he hadn’t leant anything and he would probably fail…no one wants to see their companions fail :(

Hahaha omfggggg she took off her hoodie with no tank top underneath! I love the element of surprise…like BOOM in your face Pi now you see boobies wrapped in black lace…what chu gonna do now?

Dude the reason I am not commenting that much is because I am re reading this so intently that I don’t know what to write…it’s just too good and I’m picturing it all happening kekekeke

Mahhhhnnn I seriously admire you how you build up sexual tension with little things…it’s like KYAAAAAAAAAAAaa DO IT ALREADY!!! I love that feeling and you are so freaking good at it…oh sensei-sama I have so much to learn from you!!!

Awwwwwww Pi is so freaking cute! I love the whole explanation as to why they aren’t ready for sex yet…I mean I get it I so get it…I think both of them are so into each other that maybe if they have sex too soon they might ruin it? I dunno it’s that feeling…they aren’t ready because they are waiting to make it official…they are waiting to be certain that they both only want each other…ne??

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa omfg the make out session was to die for…to…die…for!!! I loved it! Woman you are so bloody good it hurts my feels and my heart because they both explode into a tiny little pieces!!!

Holy Shit Toma…:(

Man Jasmine is really sad about Toma leaving huh…their relationship is so complicated and yet I admire Toma for leaving this place for Lillith…

I wonder if she will be able to convince Lillith and make it all better?

Awww Ryo and Ayu :( I really hope they make up soon. Its sad to see them so distant and it seems that Ryo is working hard for their relationship…

Update soon! I love you so so much!!! *heart*

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Sex On The Beach on Oct 29, 2013 08:26 PM [Report This]

I'M READING. YOU WOULD NEVER HAVE GUESSED, RIGHT? (okay so actually I'm supposed to be writing an English essay that I'm supposed to hand in tomorrow)
Chri and Auy meeting each other... So I sorta know/guess Auy is sick now but I'm still mad at her (Am I allowed to be mad at a fictional character or is it weird? :O) Okay yeah I'm mad at Auy. Of course your friend is trying hard! YOU'RE FRIENDS. THAT'S THE POINT OF IT. GOSH. And is it ever really better to make your friends feel like shit than not tell them something?
Okay now I'm reminded that Chri was a bit too head over heels for Pi in the beginning and forgot her friends... So she kinda has the right to act like that... I'm torn...
Should I not hold grudges against either one of these fictional characters? But how can I do that? xD Okay, so they're going to the club and Auy needs to look sexy. Moving on.
SEUNG RIIIIII. I can totally imagine him getting his clothes off. i mean seriously... He's playful like that, right? Goofy and a bit irresponsible. xD And competing to be the rookie of the night... at a strip bar. Lol
I think Ryo is the one stripping... for Auy.... isn't he? *reads more*
Hmm.. I want to know why Auy danced with him too. And I kinda want her to realize it might not have been a nice thing to do.
HAHAHAHA! Seungri is debuting lol.
I WAS RIGHT YO! *a winners dance*
Hopefully this will make Auy open up ^^ And it also might make her understand how Chri felt since it's her boyfriend being lusted after now.
“YOU’RE LOOKING AT HIM TOO! AND DON’T LIE! YOU ENCOURAGED HIM TO DO THIS DIDN’T YOU?” HAHAHAHAHA
Ryo's so sweet. :) He continues to try. I like him.
YOU BEING PREGNANT SHOULDN'T HAVE MADE YOU ACT SO DOUCHEY AUY BUT I'LL LET IT GO BECAUSE ILL SAY IT WAS HORMONES AND BABIES ARE CUTE, OKAY?
(Okay I'm really weird for talking to a fictional character on my review... Sorry)
OOH OH OH rehearsal dinner in the next chapter? That means Chri will go with Jun right? Will there be tension *already excited*
Love you! Thank you for an amazing update ^^ and update again soon, okay?

Christine reviewed Sex On The Beach on Oct 29, 2013 07:33 PM [Report This]

OMFG OMFG OMFG FIRST OF ALL

YOU UPDATED YLIMD!!!! I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW! LIKE SERIOUSLY!!! THE HAPPINESS IS OOZING OUT OF EVERY PORE IN MY BODY!!!! FUCK YOU SWEAT, HAPPINESS IS COMING THROUGH! ok that was unnecessary but yeah I'm fucking happy!!!

On to the chapter!

Awww Christine went to see Ayu to make it better! I am glad she didn't shut the door in her face too...it would be sad...

Man I understand Ayu perfectly. Christine needed to chill about her hanging out with Pi but I guess it was hard since their relationship is kind of complicated...I think she was more afraid of what Pi would do to Ayu rather than the other way round...kind of the insecure paranoid Christine coming out here...which makes you wonder if their relationship is built on strong foundations or not...

Ahhh I'm happy she managed to convince Ayu to go out with her, going out will do them both some good and man I can feel Ayu's tension run high...and it's not the good kind of tension!

omg...Omg...OMg...OMG!!!!!!!!!

SEUNGRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!

HE'S A JAZZ SINGER TAKING HIS CLOTHES OFF!!!

This is going to be an awesome night hehehe

Omg who is the other guy? and Shigeee!!! Haven't seen him in a while.

Lol Seungri is overly excited isnt he? :P I bet he will rock his bod and "husstlinnnnn" perfectly ;)

Aw Man...Jasmine is sad Toma is leaving...I'm kinda sad he's quitting too but it's for the best. I guess it shows how much he loves Lillith :D

Ahahaha Ayumu and Christine are hilarious in this bit...Ayu is about to bite Chri's head off and Chri is just like please please lets go in for a few minutes to satisfy my lame hormonal feels?

Yeah Ayu not booking Pi because of his body was a bit of a brain freeze for me too...why did she book him then? Could she have unconsciously associated him with helping emotional girls like her best friend and maybe she thought he could help her too?

GOTTA TALK TO YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!! LOL SORRY SEUNGRI MOMENT KEKEKEKEKE

Hahaha you had to throw in the annoying fan girls didn't you?

ahh that was really unprofessional but I wonder who the other rookie is kekekkee

AHAHAHA OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG
IT'S RYO I KNEW IT I KNEW IT BWAHAHAHA THIS IS HILARIOUS!!!!

OMFG AYU IS GOING CRAZY!!! I would too!!! BITCH GET YOUR SLUTTY HANDS OFF OF MY MAN!!!

THAT ASS IS MINE TO SPANK!

lmaooooooooooooooo

this is priceless

NON EXISTENT MAN TITS BWAHAHAHAHAH

Not all are blessed with boobies I'm afraid...tsk tsk hahahahaha

Lol angry Ayu is funny...dick-face XD

Awww Ryo and Ayumu are so sweet!!! I'm really glad they found each other again. Kudos to Jasmine and her elite team of erotic dancers ehehehehehe

kyahhhhhhhh yamapine momenttttt hehehe lol really? Blushing? That's kind of cute to see Pi blushing like that hehehe

OMFG
OMFG
OMFG
SHE'S PREGNANT

I KNEW IT I KNEW AYU WAS PREGNANT AND RYO FAINTED???
AHAHAHAA OMFG THIS IS HILARIOUS I NEED MORE I NEED MORE AND THE TEASERS? HOLY SHIT WHAT DID CHRISTINE DO!!???

LOOKS LIKE MORE DRAMA IS COMING UP AND I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!

I LOVE YOU BROWN SUGAR!!!!

holy shit the poster

the poster

THIS WAS SUPPOSED TO BE CAPS

AGAIN

HOLY SHIT THE POSTER IS FUCKING PERFECT I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS!!!

THE MANIP...SEUNGRI AND RYOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

OMFG YOUR SKILLS KILL ME WITH AMAZINGNESS EACH TIME

THIS WAS PURELY EPIC

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Sexy Hospital Plans on Oct 07, 2013 05:47 PM [Report This]

Okay, so it's been forever since I last read YLIMD. And finally I'm going to grab the bull by its horns and stop avoiding it. I havent done it earlier 'cause it had been so long that I had forgotten the characters and I wanted to reread some of it but I know I never will so let's just hope I'll be able to follow this. I'll try my best! Wish me luck mwahhh! ( I did reread the last chapter I had read so I shouldnt be completely clueless. And OMG I looooveee Annie's character and I still love the dream).
Btw, think about it... The last time I read this I still wasn't that close to you. Like you said in one of those review replies... Odd. It's been like a year and months. Just let that sink in.
AND THANK GOD YOU MADE THAT RECAP. Or just thank you... haha

I actually love the dream part even more now that I know how much you love interpreting dreams. And Freud is an interesting fellow. He must've been really smart. Although he was also a douche. He though every woman wanted a penis, didn't he?

OH yeah. Now I remember. Jun was the total nerd, right? Since he seems to be the only one of the three who manages to study. He's mad 'cause he likes her, isn't he? It kinda makes me feel bad for him.

Seriously what the fuck is wrong with Auy?? It has been bothering me. I have to say; whatever it is, she ain't handling it well.

Okay... I'm a bit iffy about yuki. She was his ex... I remember that but nothing else. *sighs*

Auy was at the hospital? Okay. Like... Seriously. Even if she's sick and I'll probably find out. I think she's kind of a bitch for mixing up her friends 'companion' to it. Like... Come ON! Way to make your best friends feel like shit man.
(side note: Dude, you really love bad guys dont you? You kinda wrote Toma to be your dream guy, didn't you?)

Talia and Shige are so cute. I bet Shige knows exactly what he's doing all the times. He's a smart fellow staying quiet.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT OKAY AND ILL READ ANOTHER CHAPTER MAN. UPDATE SOON, NEH?

Lil Daisy reviewed Oh You Brain Tease! on Sep 12, 2013 02:48 PM [Report This]

haha you big tease you

ichigoyamada reviewed Prepping for Failure on Mar 21, 2013 12:53 AM [Report This]

[Dear Yamapi & Christine, PLEASE STOP TEASING EACH OTHER! WHY DON'T BOTH OF YOU JUST... JUST DO THAT!!!!! *sigh*]
LOL, if i meet those couple in real life, i'll shout like that XD

Nice story Lillith, even there's some parts that makes me a little bit confused, but it's REALLY A GOOD STORY!!!! Please update :D

ichigoyamada reviewed Prologue on Mar 20, 2013 02:08 AM [Report This]

Starting reading this from chapter 1 :D :D :D

Christine reviewed Prepping for Failure on Mar 19, 2013 06:52 PM [Report This]

YOU UPDATED YOU UPDATED I'M SO HAPPY!!!
I loved all the scenes...it gave us a picture of where everyone stands.

Ayumu and Ryo...man both of them are passing through such a difficult phase...
They both still clearly love each other but Ryo has no idea what Ayumu is thinking...or what happened to make her start acting this way.
I think he is going to burst and ask her what the fuck is going on...and then maybe she is will tell him.
I think his patience is wearing thin and he is going to lose it at some point.
Ayumu...man Ayumu must feel so scared...she probably thinks that he is going to leave her and is trying to decide what the hell she is going to do on her own...
It's a really stressful situation and I hope both of them can over come it soon.

Awwww Yamapiiiiiii!!!
This made me think though...where are his and Ame's parents? He clearly is the one who is taking care of his baby sister so that must have a weight on himself...bills, food, anything that Ame needs, clothes etc etc he has to pay for everything...
What happened to his parents?
Also...wahhaha Christine being all bossy is funny lol

JUNNNNNNNNNNNNN!! OK I love Daisy here...she is finally making Jun bring out his balls lol. I mean...he hasn't fought for Christine at all...just dejectedly admired her from the side...so I can't wait to see how he is going to bring out his claws and fight!!! (remembers smut scene in the corridor...HOLY CANNOLI I CAN'T WAIT!)lol

Ok you didn't tell us who was behind Toma's door..and who is this guy now?
I don't like it that Toma lillith are fighting >< I don't like it at all.

KYAAAAAAAAAaaa hahahah motivation!! Now that's what I'm talking about XD
Lol poor Pi though...Christine is making him feel utterly stupid isn't she?
Lol that is an interesting thing to propose...but I wonder...30minutes? Will he really be able to remember anything in 30 minutes?XD
OMFG OMFG OMFG THAT DOG TAG COMMENT STILL GETS TO ME!
I don't know how you do it woman but you are fucking brilliant!!! It's like sooo sexy and yet still so innocent?
I dunno it's like a harder punch than if they were already naked...I LOVE YOUR SEXUAL TENSION!
She really shouldn’t tease him like this…because even though he was used to being with a variety of different women, it was hard for him to hold himself back from the one he really wanted.
KYAAAAAAAAAA I LOVE THIS LINE IT'S SO SWEET KEKEKEKE

Oh man...poor Lillith...Why can't they just talk about it?
Well yeah sometimes one party is not ready to talk to the other one about something they brought up themselves...
Toma and Jasmine's relationship really is weird and it's strange that he didn't tell her everything in the first place...
Maybe he thought it was unnecessary for her to know...because Jasmine was important for him but Lillith was more and maybe he was afraid she wouldn't realise it...
UPDATE SOON OMFG
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH
LOVE YOU

Christine reviewed Sexy Hospital Plans on Feb 26, 2013 08:13 PM [Report This]

SERIOUSLY?
Ok like what the fuck? Why hasn’t anybody reviewed this yet?
This is an abomination I swear!
Ok I will be the first to review then!

First of all I would like to take a moment and spazz my ass off…
LILLITH UPDATED YLIMD GUYS
YOUR
LOVE
IS
MY
DRUG
YES YOU HEARD ME
I AM SO HAPPY I COULD DIE

Ok I’m back :P
You know I love this story and for many selfish reasons but I love it so much that I want it as my own…seriously…I love it.
The recap idea was a good one, it will help the readers to get back into the story (even though I like read it 4 times in between updates but it’s all gewd ;))

Oh dear…Freud…hahaha I used to like Freud back in college he’s a cool dude but as you can see he is a bit obsessed with sex…kind of like Christine in the story huh? She is definitely obsessed with getting some so I think you choose well when you made her think using the psychoanalytic theory…kekekeke you did good bb *hearts*

Ahahahaha his hair up in a coconut tree…that’s so cute I swear :P
Maybe she would realise that she kind of likes him too? That could be a motivation?
Ahh so complicated…I love it XD

Ahahaha Ryooooooooo he’s adorable and awesome lol
I love how we write him, you always give him awesome lines ahahahah
Although if he threw a fry at my head…shit’s gonna hit the fan…big time.
I love it when those two bicker lmao

Aww poor Ryo, he seems so stressed man…I wonder if he thinks that Ayu is cheating on him and wants to break up with him? Awwww so so sad :( at that point I wanted to give him a hug
Jun has grown some balls lmao…but that’s good Christine and Ryo need to talk about Ayumu in private.

Oh man, Jun is totally pissed off at Christine but I can’t remember why exactly, is it because of what Pi did in Nagase’s class? Or the fact that she returned to Pi after the dressing room scene? WNFUIJFKN I need to re read lol

Ahhh so neither of them have an idea of what’s going on with Ayu :( I kind of do have an idea but I’m not sure…
Man it seems like Ayumu is so broken inside…
Awww I don’t like it when Annie and Christine fight :( it’s just sad…lol but Ryo…he’s totally a dork but I guess he made her feel a little less hurt by his comment and angry at him?

No he hated this hospital but the girl who had texted him needed his help. She wasn’t his life, but she was important to the girl that was his life now so he’d try to take care of her
OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG
THIS WAS THE BEST LINE EVER I'm SORRY BUT IT IS I LOVE IT SO MUCH…I HAVE SO MANY FEELS RIGHT NOW KYAAAAAA ^^

Ahhh so Ayumu spent the night at the hospital :( … that’s a bad sign…

Shit…Toma and Lillith are on a break? Lillith is living with Talia…so does that mean she is living with Christine too? :D SLEEPOVER!!! LOL sorry…I have a request though…I’d like to see more of Lillith and Toma’s story in this story…I want to know more about them so please write more of them if you can xxx

Awww Annie is being mean :( but I guess she has a point and Christine does have a lot of issues to deal with
Ahahaha Ryo again…gotta love the guy!!!!!!!
OMFG DIABLO…OMFG THIS SCENE…I KNOW THE REAL SCENE AND KYAAAAAAAAAA IT MAKES ME KYAAAAAAAAA

AHAHAHAA OMFG MEDITATING ON HOW TO MAKE HIM SEXY!!! I gotta see this…lol

OMFG OMFG OMFG TALI IS GOING TO KICK TOMA’S ASS!!!! GO GIRL! I would totally do that for you Lillith totally.
LOLOLOl Tali and Shige are hilarious together! Lol it’s like Shige is her pet or something lololol tickle fest XD

OMFG OMFG OMFG
WHO IS THE GUY??
I NEED TO KNOW!!!
WHAT’S THE PAPER HE GAVE HIM?
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
UPDATE SOON
OMFG

I LOVE YOU
I LOVE THIS STORY
I LOVE YAMAPI!
LOL
MWACKS
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