Librajem reviewed Peace and Violence on Dec 14, 2010 09:01 PM [Report This]

vietgurl412, great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D

kepoh reviewed Where Was The Fourth? on Sep 17, 2010 09:33 AM [Report This]

awesome but when will the next chapter be?
Author's Response: i'm sorry. i've been really busy with school and stuff...i've got half of it written...i'll try to get to it soon.

Dreamy Luna reviewed Where Was The Fourth? on Aug 01, 2010 04:20 AM [Report This]

Awww she finally met her four childhood friends. Awesome! I liked how Nicole tried to be strong and move on. Please update soon when you can. ^_^
Author's Response: Yeah...it's been a while since i updated huh?? haha!! I'll update when i have time...been SUPER busy lately...

Dreamy Luna reviewed The Beginning on Aug 01, 2010 04:15 AM [Report This]

I love your descriptive writing. Keep it up! =D

Dreamy Luna reviewed Four Times on Aug 01, 2010 04:06 AM [Report This]

LOLOL yes city boys aren't very creative! XD Hmh... I wonder who the four boys are. =D

Dreamy Luna reviewed A Promise To Oneself on Aug 01, 2010 04:01 AM [Report This]

Great chapter! I loved how you described Nicole's feelings and how the pool helped her clear off her mind.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. hehe!! yea....i was aiming for descriptive writing :DD

Blossy reviewed Prolouge on Jul 02, 2010 05:26 PM [Report This]

ohhh nice starting! but i'm guessing Nicole will fall for another woman's man, right? XD
Author's Response: i don't know...will she?? hehe!! thanks for the comment :DD

sweetjellostraw reviewed The Beginning on Jun 22, 2010 12:21 AM [Report This]

I liked how you made Hero sound really botherly to Nicole. He seems like the appa type, yet he's more easy to talk to, and he always leaves the sentence dragging to make his little sister guess. :) Overall, nice chapter. Keep it up! ^^
Author's Response: thanks for the comment!! he is more like an appa..haha!! he's the big brother i've always wanted :D

harmony2244 reviewed The Beginning on Jun 17, 2010 03:55 AM [Report This]

ohhh i see more of you! the breakfast eating! LOL. and i love the bits of humor in this story ;) "inanimate objects!" hehe. i'm not big on the school-setting fanfiction, but i'll continue to read yours! FIGHTING! (...that and you'll probably make me read it.. :3) hahaaaaa~
Author's Response: haha!! i wont make you read it:D you dont have to...

harmony2244 reviewed Four Times on Jun 17, 2010 03:27 AM [Report This]

LOL 3 GUYS! i can't wait 'til i find out which guy is who..
ohh i also love how i can see you in Nicole, with the whole swimming...and erm..hitting the head thing. xDD HAHA. nice!
~ps. - what happened to her dad? you might've mentioned it but i'm too lazy to go back and read x)
Author's Response: hehee!! nope, didn't mention her dad....yet.....getting there...soon :D
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