Reviews For Fish Out of Water

burningzoul reviewed Making a Beginning on Sep 01, 2014 07:19 AM [Report This]

When you mentioned little mermaid in the summary I thought you meant metaphorically! But it turned out that Tego IS a mermaid LOL... I can imagine cute Tego as a mermaid. Care to tell me where I can get one?

WickedLaw reviewed Making a Beginning on Sep 01, 2014 12:42 AM [Report This]

That was a great story! I definitely enjoyed it :)

Kumohime reviewed Making a Beginning on Sep 01, 2014 12:16 AM [Report This]

OMG! You left me wanting for more!!!
I absolutly loved it! It was so well written, and the characters were perfect. Hime is a bit a Tom boy but not a cliche, and Tego's character was so well described as well. And Koyama appearance was awesome.
It's great the way you really wrote some of the points in the story, like how they meet, a surf accident instead of a shipwreck for example.
You did an amazing job, so much better than I could have imagine.
Thank you so much! It was a great beginning, I wonder if Hime would believe his story... you really got me wanting for more hahaha
Again, thank you so much, it was a great job!
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