Written for the AFF Advent Calendar 2013 - Day 13If I had to choose whether to breathe or to love you, I would use my last breath to tell you that I love you.Someday all of our dreams will come to be...
I really liked the story, so short but with so much in it. I was well written and the descriptions were so vivid, I really loved the use you gave to the coffee and the scent. Great use of the prompt. Great job!
A very-short story with so much told. I like it. Though I would suggest you cut some sentences that has too much commas into shorter ones, just to make it more comfortable to read. But the ending is catchy and unpredictable. Cool!
How interesting! I really liked the contrast of real life to the surrounding aspects of coffee. Creative usage of the prompt for sure.
I also enjoyed your varied and complex sentence structures- they create a feeling of... reality? Not sure how to explain it. But it seems more intimate and actual. Great job, and I really loved that last sentence: "Prehaps it was time to change taste." Really is the icing on the cake!