Reviews For Caramel Macchiato

hunnyhugs reviewed CARAMEL MACCHIATO on Jul 11, 2014 08:27 AM [Report This]

hi! chrisa~
enjoy reading this!
really make me wanna have a cup of latte...
thank you for producing my prompt beautifully ;')

cahaya reviewed CARAMEL MACCHIATO on Jul 02, 2014 12:43 AM [Report This]

different kind of story but well written and love the flow of the story ...
quite interesting and keep up the good work ...take care ^_^ ;)

Kumohime reviewed CARAMEL MACCHIATO on Jun 26, 2014 07:03 AM [Report This]

I really liked the story, so short but with so much in it.
I was well written and the descriptions were so vivid, I really loved the use you gave to the coffee and the scent. Great use of the prompt.
Great job!

burningzoul reviewed CARAMEL MACCHIATO on Jun 26, 2014 05:09 AM [Report This]

A very-short story with so much told. I like it. Though I would suggest you cut some sentences that has too much commas into shorter ones, just to make it more comfortable to read. But the ending is catchy and unpredictable. Cool!

YoonEunHyeFan reviewed CARAMEL MACCHIATO on Jun 26, 2014 02:16 AM [Report This]

Awww this was a sweet story. I liked that he remembers her from the taste and smell of coffee. Great story

Kristy reviewed CARAMEL MACCHIATO on Jun 26, 2014 02:03 AM [Report This]

How interesting! I really liked the contrast of real life to the surrounding aspects of coffee. Creative usage of the prompt for sure.

I also enjoyed your varied and complex sentence structures- they create a feeling of... reality? Not sure how to explain it. But it seems more intimate and actual. Great job, and I really loved that last sentence: "Prehaps it was time to change taste." Really is the icing on the cake!
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