OMG this was adorable that last scene where he just warned her saying that he wasn't going to save her right now i was like huh what is he going to do :O?

AND THEN KYAAA. They kissed and I was like omg this was an adorable kissing scene. I like that Pi was realistically scared she would push him away! And kyaa she didn't and ahhh-

this was all just perfectly adorable and the poster was actually adorable! I love how you mixed in the prop too :) that was well done.

Hm.... Snowflake ball? Well, that sounds a bit familiar! :O You must be the same author, then. I'll keep my eye out, then!

And lookie there, Pi's to the rescue again :) He honestly must either have extrasensory skills or is just really, really perceptive of Chri! I love it! All that... protectiveness, it's so WILD. You go, Pi, YOU GO!

And I love how awkward he can get, right after being handsome and suave. It's like he's a real person, you know, that has feelings and emotions like anyone else! (Except for the fact he's YAMAPI!)

And that kiss at the end, nawwwww :) Good job! It was cute.

Aaawww. Yamapi always to the rescue xD

The guy following them was scary, but he did them a favor in the end ;)

The kissing scene was so cute. Yamapi was soooo cute :D

Really sweet story

Oh this is like Chri's version while Snow Flakes was Lillith's. That was pretty good idea but haha it gave you :P
It was soo sweet!

haha.. i love the flirting in this story. thanks for sharing!

i really really loved the ending

evening authornim...
thank you for beautifully written one shot...
love this pairing ...
pi save the day ...love their moments together ...
wow the kissing part...really love the ending...
take care & keep up the good work ^_^ ;)