cahaya

cahaya reviewed Too Long! - Maki Version on Jan 23, 2012 02:29 PM [Report This]

evening chri
just noticed that u posted maki's version
quite interesting just like yamapi's version
suspense as pi's trying to confess to maki as ichikawa show up...aisshh ...kekekek
love the story...keep it up dear ;)
Tuss

Tuss reviewed Too Long! - Maki Version on Oct 18, 2011 01:35 PM [Report This]

This was really cute :) and I like "behind the scenes" stories, makes me feel like it could've actually happened.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you also enjoyed the Yamapi Version! Thanks a lot for your review <333
Olimp_Tenshi

Olimp_Tenshi reviewed Too Long! - Maki Version on Apr 20, 2011 12:21 PM [Report This]

Hmm... you could say I like Yamaki, I guess. Bu I'm not a fan of it, because I hate seeing MY Pi with a girl :))) Aren't I possessive? lol
Author's Response: OMG YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY!!! I DONT LIKE YAMAKI ANYMORE LIKE.....SERIOUSLY I CANT STAND THEM HAHA And I agree with you...we are both possessive hhaha ;) ORIGINAL CHARACTERS FTW!!!! hahaha btw I'm on chatango if you wanna talk! :)
Olimp_Tenshi

Olimp_Tenshi reviewed Too Long! - Maki Version on Apr 20, 2011 05:58 AM [Report This]

Hi, Christine! I finally had time to read Maki's version. She is so cute having a crush on Yamapi. She acts like a teenager with her first crush :))
I really love how there are two versions, depicting both of the characters' feelings.

Yamapi FOREVER!
Author's Response: hii!!! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Thank you for liking this version too! kekeke yeah they are in fact just two teens crushing over each other :D I take it you are a yamaki fan huh? YAMAPI KAKKOIIII! XD
Tierra

Tierra reviewed Too Long! - Maki Version on Feb 11, 2011 12:59 PM [Report This]

nice
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