Reviews For Destiny

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 20- Tears on Nov 18, 2012 08:39 PM [Report This]

I was waiting for some drama and it happened! i wouldnt mind more drama and dramatic emotions :D im that kind of person xD Why is Toma being like that? Why must he be so mean... *pouts* And then Juns just so nice and in love... i want him and mao together but i want toma to be jealous as revenge! i think i mentioned im a vengeful person earlier... if i didnt... well i am :/
And you shouldnt feel too bad about the updates :) there are a lot of other writers who update a lot more rarely than you do. Just take your time and do your best ^^

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 13- Ichigo Bar on Nov 18, 2012 07:45 PM [Report This]

hmm... im kinda interested and cause im interested im going to be a bad reader and not review every chapter cause i wanna read faster *bows* im sorry. And btw i dont think a chapter can ever be too long ;)

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 10- The DoS Changing on Nov 18, 2012 07:28 PM [Report This]

Woah he's inlove already :o I wonder how Mao's feeling now

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 9- The Confrontation on Nov 18, 2012 07:21 PM [Report This]

xD i started laughing when i thought about jun going to apologize... i mean if mao was choppin something she must have had a knife in her hand haha. Im curious to know if Shun was aware Mao liked her in the past...

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 8- Shun�s persistence and Maki�s new look on things on Nov 18, 2012 07:17 PM [Report This]

noooooo, now makis siding with jun *pouts* i guess im just too vengeful xd is Shun planning on inviting jun over to the park or at his place? ill see that in a while :P on to the next chapter!

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 7- Recognition on Nov 18, 2012 07:12 PM [Report This]

hahaha Mao remembers and is not happy xD YES!! she shouldnt forgive him right away :D *evil laugh* make him suffer! And awesome this time there's more line spacing, its so much easier to read ^^

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 6- Such A Small World on Nov 18, 2012 07:08 PM [Report This]

OMO!! THEY MET AGAIN!!! AND SHE REMEMBERED??? ooh... whats gonna happen now... im getting anxious

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 5- A sense of Foreboding? on Nov 18, 2012 07:02 PM [Report This]

oooh, who's he introducing? i wanna knoowww :3

Hmm... i dont have a problem with the chapter, but could you maybe put a little more spacing between the lines? do you get what i mean? I dont know the right terms...

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 4- A Slight Recognition on Nov 18, 2012 06:58 PM [Report This]

TOMAAAA >____< *sighs* such a nice guy... does he love her back or does he think of her just as a friend? I so know the feeling of just being about to remember when someone interrupts you and you lose what you almost remembered...

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 3- Dream and Friends on Nov 18, 2012 06:55 PM [Report This]

hmmm, i wonder what will be mao and juns next encounter :P Jun was so enticed by maos eyes, i bet he'll never forget them
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