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"Most of what I remember makes me sure I should have stopped you from walking out the door."

Read By Far, a story by Ooper (Original Fiction)
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Reviewer: Kristy starstarstarstarstar - Date: Feb 03, 2013 11:18 AM - Title: Ability and Song [Report This]

Maki and Eiji kissed? WHAT? That was interesting! I'm still hoping for Eiji and Mao to get together... I mean, they BELONG together! When will they be able to just get over themselves and just kiss? And where did Maki go? Hm... Something seems suspicious. Anyways, I really liked the song and you friend's voice is really smooth. Did he play the guitar to it? He must be really talented! I can't wait until the next update!~

Author's Response: Hey Kristy! It was Mao and Eiji who kissed. I am sorry if this chapter was a bit confusing T_T it was such a long time ago since I wrote it and I just sort of beta-read it a couple of days ago and didn't change much of the story outline. Teehee... BTW... I AM SO HAPPY YOU DOWNLOADED THE SONG! I really thought no one would ever read this story. I wasn't getting any feedback from anyone and was starting to get depressed when I read you review. THank you thank you so much for that! My friend would be happy to know your thoughts ;) and to answer your question, yes. He's the one who sang, played the instrument and patched up all the music in between. ^_^v

Reviewer: maohartjun starstarstarstarstar - Date: Apr 07, 2011 06:31 AM - Title: Familiar [Report This]

aaw THANKYOU for your end note haha "shy" "covers face"!! Wow read this update & I totally want to know who the new girl is & what this unknown is really about honestly its like a drama or movie cause its a really good story (no doubt). Anyway I will gladly wait patiently for your next updates!!! So I have enjoyed reading & keep well as you write this awesome fanfic...THANKYOU again awesome author (^___^)

Author's Response: maohartjun, i did try to make it have that suspense feel like in the Jdramas but it's still short in some way. hehe... i hope you get to enjoy this update. *hugs* the person you want to know is going to be revealed as well. so many revelations. ^_^v

Reviewer: Lil Daisy - Date: Mar 21, 2011 02:08 AM - Title: Familiar [Report This]

banzai!
i think i drank too much tea today. I have been suffering from too much work and too little time to write these days but am sure as hell still reading.

Author's Response: Daisy, I do understand the too much work and too little time part... but i love the part where you still keep on reading despite the schedule. heh. and you know how i love you for that too! *hugs*

Reviewer: maohartjun starstarstarstarstar - Date: Mar 17, 2011 03:51 AM - Title: Friends and Relatives [Report This]

oh pls let this not be the ending cause this story is awesome I need more haha....getting addictive & avid reader ^_^ the suspense of this story !

Author's Response: OMG!!! your comment just reminded me to update... haha.. I lurve you because of that and thank you. thank you big time for reading my stuff and reviewing on it nonetheless. I miss reviews so much and yours just made my day. you don't know how much IT MADE MY DAY! *hugs* btw, have you read my one shot about MAOxJUN? I have it in my Inoue Mao One SHOTs entitled VEIL (CLICK HERE FOR LINK) Hope you enjoy it as much as you enjoyed this fic. ^_^v

Reviewer: maohartjun starstarstarstarstar - Date: Mar 17, 2011 03:26 AM - Title: Realization [Report This]

omg....omg....powers Mao has powers & Eiji oh wow never would have thought (haha ghosts, guess not) yes I like this chapter & I'm glad Mao tried out for the audition wow wish I can really hear her sing haha but I know that this is only a fanfic & shes now in the band...yay...

Author's Response: i would have to tell you... mao sings horribly if it's ballad! lolz. i heard a clip where she tried singing Flavor of Life by Utada Hikaru and i felt so bad for her. haha... BUT she sang this cute song from Anmitsu Hime, its the opening song where she sang with another artist as well. I think if she sang for a rock song, she wouldn't be that bad. that's how i initially came up with this story, i wanted to hear her singing rock after hearing that Flavor of Life version. heh.

Reviewer: maohartjun starstarstarstarstar - Date: Mar 17, 2011 03:12 AM - Title: Confusion [Report This]

omg ghost?? does Mao have a ghost following her or what haha I like this story....I cannot wait to read the rest !

Author's Response: no ghost. i'm scared of ghosts so... yeah. no ghosts in any of my fics for now. BUT i'm not removing that in my perspective for any future projects. ^_^v

Reviewer: maohartjun starstarstarstarstar - Date: Mar 17, 2011 02:53 AM - Title: Daily Living [Report This]

I like it already......fun & sweet, wonder what the rest will be like...thanks (^_^)

Author's Response: i hope you would still like the succeeding chapters :)

Reviewer: Lil Daisy - Date: Jan 05, 2011 06:44 AM - Title: Realization [Report This]

me likey new chapter. i always think eiji has a really deep side to him (comparative to teppei then? Psuedo sounds like a band i can rock out too :D
Tsumasaki by Ore Ska is a great song by i like pinnochio and jitensha better :D
p/s - waant a poster for this? i suddenly had an image of mao in front of the psuedo members.
send me an email if you want it :D

Author's Response: yes!!!!! i still want a poster for this ^_^v thank you my dear daisy!!! i am really happy you read it ^_^v

Reviewer: Lil Daisy - Date: Dec 24, 2010 12:19 AM - Title: Confusion [Report This]

yellow skirt in a rock band? so cute lol ~ only mao :D

Author's Response: you're reading this? whaaa... i'm happy you're checking this out. my very first sci-fi romantic stuff. can't believe it was too crappy before... but i'm editing it all now. haha. happy holidays my dear daisy! *hugs*

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